May 3, 2018
Recently, I read about a new factory in a trade publication. I will not name the magazine or company because it is not relevant.
The article touted the new technology and safety of the plant, indicating that it was to replace a factory owned by the same firm that had been in the area for about 50 years. The company’s representative quoted in the article praised the firm’s long ties to the area.
At the very end, the piece noted approximately as follows:
“The company plans to fill all of the positions at the plant with employees from the closed facility.”
Sounds nice, doesn’t it? The workers from the old plant will migrate to the new one, right? Think of reading this very closely. How? Try moving the modifier, “all of the”. It now reads:
“The company plans to fill the positions at the plant with all of the employees from the closed facility.”
But the actual quote does not mean this. Now you understand that the sentence actually means some employees at the closed plant will NOT be working in the new one. What was not said was telling you more about what is actually going on.
“Yesterday, upon the stair, I met a man who wasn’t there.” Hugo Mearns